Three critiques
Critique rubrics. Each critique asks one question of the week's work. Critique 1 is where A1 is assessed, Critique 2 is where A2 is assessed, and Critique 3 is feedback on the way to A3.
- Critique 1
- Day 5 · Fri 27 Nov
- Critique 2
- Day 10 · Fri 4 Dec
- Critique 3
- Day 15 · Fri 11 Dec
- Each student
- 13 minutes
- Assesses
- A1 and A2
How they run
Each critique takes the full day: 9:30–12:30 and 1:15–2:45, about 13 minutes per student, with your peer group of four in the room. Everyone else keeps working in the studio.
You present
The position, the work, and the one thing you most need feedback on.
Questions
The facilitator and your peers ask. You answer; you don't defend.
Notes
Everyone writes. You leave with the notes, and one next step.
Critique 1 assesses A1 (20%) and Critique 2 assesses A2 (30%), both against the rubrics on the assessment page. Critique 3 isn't marked: it's feedback on the artefact before A3 (50%).
Three minutes
- Who is speaking.
The identity, its condition and its position, in two sentences. Don't read the manifesto unless it's Critique 1.
- What's on the wall.
Point to the work. Say what it is and how it was made.
- Your question.
The one thing you most need the room to think about. "Is it good?" doesn't count.
Pin up before your slot: the work, plus that week's log on one A4 sheet so reviewers can read it while you set up.
Peer notes
In the last two minutes, each person in the room writes three lines and hands them over.
For: [identity name] · Critique [1/2/3] · From: [your name] What holds: [the strongest thing, specifically] What's thin: [where the position or the work goes vague] A question: [one you couldn't ask in the time]
Write about the work and the position, not the person. Be specific enough that the note is useful tomorrow morning.
Critique 1
Who is speaking? What do they care about? Would this voice matter outside the studio?
Bring: identity worksheet, manifesto, references, the condition it answers to, the week's log on one A4 sheet.
A1 · 20%
Submitted in your repository by 3:30 the same day, and presented here.
The A1 rubric: four criteria, each at four levels, with their weights.
Critique 2
Does the system speak in the identity's voice, or could anyone's rules have made this?
Bring: running system, 20 outputs, parameter table, authorship log, the week's log on one A4 sheet.
A2 · 30%
Submitted in your repository by 3:30 the same day, and presented here.
The A2 rubric: four criteria, each at four levels, with their weights.
Critique 3
Does the physical work embody the system, and does the material carry the identity's position?
Feedback only. The same questions are assessed in A3.
Bring: prototype, test log, production file, exhibition proposal, the week's log on one A4 sheet.
| Criterion | Emerging | Developing | Resolved |
|---|---|---|---|
| MaterialCarries the position | The medium was chosen for convenience. | A reasoned choice, not yet visible in the object. | The material's behaviour carries the identity's position. |
| FidelityThe system, embodied | The object is a picture of an output, adjusted by hand. | The system made the file; the link is partly lost in making. | The object is clearly the system's output, translated with care. |
| CraftProduction | No tests, or a production file that doesn't pass its checks. | Tests done; the final file needs more work. | Tested, checked, locked, with a fallback planned. |
| ExhibitionThe zone | No idea yet of how the work will be shown. | A proposal that lists items without a reading order. | A clear proposal: what a visitor meets first, and why. |
After the critique
- Photograph the notes cards.
Into
log/, the same day. - Write that day's log entry about the critique.
Decided: the one change you'll make first, and why the identity would make it.
- Start Monday with it.
The next week's first day begins from the critique, not from where you were before it.